Wednesday, November 27, 2019

Friday, November 22, 2019

Jabez persuasive writing - Exotic trees

Planning 
Topic
Exotic trees 
Position 
Should be cut off
Reason 1
Because they are not supposed to  be in NZ
Reason 2
So that NZ species can live.
Reason 3
So there can be more native plants. 

Writing

Intro
-States the topic and your position
-Mentions your three main ideas
I firmly believe that exotic plants should be cut down because native animals are dying. Also because they are not supposed to be in NZ, so that NZ species can live and so there can be more native plants.
Para 1
-States your first idea.
-Explains the idea
-Gives evidence or examples to support your idea. 
Because they are not supposed to be in NZ.
So if we cut it off and plant 1500 native trees
NZ will be a better place.


Para 2
-States your second idea.
-Explains the idea
-Gives evidence or examples to support your idea. 
So that NZ species can live.

If we cut off the exotic trees than there
Will be more Native animals.

Para 3
-States your third idea.
-Explains the idea
-Gives evidence or examples to support your idea. 
So that there will be more native plants.

So there will be a lot more Native plants which means there will be more Native animals and alot more freshnes.

How many native trees are in New Zealand?
New Zealand native trees by botanical names: R – Z
There are around five hectares of cultivated native plant collections and about 96 hectares of mature and regenerating native forest
Conc
Recaps your three main ideas and re states your position. 
They are not supposed to be in NZ.
So that NZ species can live.
And so there can be more Native plants.